Tucked deep within an enchanted forest lies a magical stream. This stream is no ordinary stream, for it's told whatever you place below the water will turn to gold. Explorers have searched for this stream for ages. Theodore Downs vowed to be the first explorer to reach this elusive stream.
Afters years of research, Theo pinpointed a possible location for the forbidden stream. Excitement and curiosity blinded him for what was to come on this treacherous quest. Peril and doom hide in the shadows unless he can courageously lead his men from the inevitable danger surrounding the magical stream.
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Mrs Maclean Team 100WC
12/11/2013 03:13:05 am
Some very ambitious vocabulary in this week's 100WC, well done! I particularly like the idea of peril and doom hiding in the shadows. Keep up the good work. :-)
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12/13/2013 12:21:12 am
The writing started with a very relaxing feel but soon became more worrying. I liked the way you used description to create a picture in the reader's mind.
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