ZOOM! They both scurried to the end of the block. When they stopped to catch their breathe they saw a pizza boy park at the house. Click. The car door shut. He began to walk to the house.
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kelsie
11/25/2013 11:58:44 pm
I like that alot. : )
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zara
11/26/2013 02:15:36 am
you really take peoples breath away! why did you choose a giant bird poop to go on the pizza boys head? why something more dangerous like a dagger?
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Mrs Fine 100WC Team (Surrey, UK)
12/2/2013 07:24:55 am
Hi Mr Stehm
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